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Old 04-23-05, 12:26 PM   #7
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THIS WAS AIGHT, more of a home town typa shout out i feel
no lines that really stuck out that i thought were WAY better
then the other...it was to be honest a monotonous read...
gun play was a bit overdone....stay up though, this style may work
for you with a bit more effort n thought put into it....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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