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Old 04-23-05, 12:38 PM   #23
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Kid your punches are more like your hair due getting "fade"(d)*
Even though you got an "earing" don't mean your punches is wicked*
^^nah , this was forced n weak
Kid never be extreme, couldn't spit nice if he waxed his tongue clean
Even if you sucked the devils blood, still you wouldnt be pack with s.t.d's (disease)
^^forced again, horrible structure
This fool couldnt come up with dope "jokes" if he had adam sandler ghost write for him
Kid your gay, i bet you tha q asked you "what you looked like>?" instead of a pic you had it filmed
^^not even a punch
Kid i know what's your favorite fruits are, them big apples you like to suck on *
Your punches are so aimless, matter of fact your more "less" than a dumb blond
^^meh, this was real weak
Your punches are mix with blonde and brunettes, they have mental block (get it)
You wearing a white tee, you not reppin for the hoods, you reppin for the cream from your mens cock
^^wow stretched to shit, n weak as hell
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overall, this verse lacked flow, punches, good vocab, structure....and everything else that makes a verse worth readin, sorry bk...elevate...
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BK a loser..bitches "throw his facial" like "pitchin cosmetics"
he gets dumber n dumber..if i spit "logic" he still couldnt get it
^^ok, weak opener ...better then his though
each rap is pathetic, so he hides his record cuz he regrets it!
brawla must suck "cock thru ass" cuz dis "crack-head-is-shit!"
^^flow fell off.....decent bar though
count bills? u illiterate, so u "stick 2 checks" like "elmer nikes"*
i seldom type, while BK "stroke pens" til da inks 2 "hard 2 write"
^^koo...similies
dis loser might, think he "pippen on text" but i'm "jordan on mics"
u'd lose ina fight, he got a "sex change"..but still dis "mans-a-dike
^^punch??....weak
i damage kids, u da opposite u hand em rings n ask 4 wack blows
nickname u "micheal jackson"..y? u "nuts" dats y we call u "jack-o"*

^^eh....
overall your a better battler but thats not to say your punches were good, you just had better everything...
stop the damn"""""""""""...its wack unless it a really
complicated bar, i mean...your shit aint tech..
so quit trying to make it look as if it is...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!