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Old 04-23-05, 01:44 PM   #8
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Voted For: 9th Degree



This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
^^decent, but not a good opener
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
^^""not needed....simple but decent
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
^^eh, your best so far
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
^^nah, this was wack
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
^^no punch.....full filler
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
^^decent but played concept...
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overall, your flow lacked, creativity was average
personals were simple, nothin to good outta ya verse...
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I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
^^lol,.this was a good opener...
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
^^ohh, lol,...funny shit
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
^eh, decent
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
^^decent
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
^^nice setup n good punch/personal.
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
^^eh, this was aight.
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overall, you had some ok punches but 2 bars stood out
amoung the rest n seemed to connect iin my opinion..
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i gotta go with 9th on this, he just had better punches
flow....n creativity was also better...structure was eh though..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!