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Old 04-23-05, 02:02 PM   #30
mizz fyre
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Voted For: Buck.Shot

this battle was weak....but my vote goes to tephlon because i felt his punches were more direct.....he came at him harder with the personals....only critiscism would be your structure which made your flow sway way off point.....
your diss ta Tha Q? hahaha...
not 1 positive feed, an it took 6 months ta rehearse it!

^^^liked this line.....prolly the best in the verse

Effect you need to come more direct with your punches....didn't really read a real good punch or personal in your whole verse...but your flow was on point.....even tho.... teph took this
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