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Old 04-23-05, 02:16 PM   #25
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: PreZidict

votin for pre


ight pre got this due to a more harder verse, he got hard with his punches his flow was on the mark the strucutre was nice and easy to read... ide like to see some personals and multies in ya verse pre but ya creative punches made up for thm in the long run
good battle fam

Bk ya verse was good nice strucutre n flow but ya punches didnt really seem to hit their target get a lil more harder n throw some hard personals at your oppenents. use some multies in ya verses to fam. elevate on ya punches and ya personals n you will go places fam

good battle fams
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