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IP:
This Was A Decent Peice , I Felt It Could Have Been Alot Better
I Felt You Could Have Used Better Vocab, Maybe Some Stronger Wordplay,
Structure Was Pretty Good , Sorta Feel Off In The Middle.
Concept Was Okay, Could Have Been Alot Better...
Elevate On The Grabing The Alittle Better... And Try To Use Better Wordplay,
And Vocab , Keep It Up Though , And Drop A Link Or This'll Get Closed
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