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Old 04-23-05, 03:50 PM   #32
YOUNG_CITY
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Voted For: CA$per

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
bad choice to use this as a opener, but a nice personals

Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
eh, couldve been worded wayy better, but descent

This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
I understand it, but i wasnt feelin this. pretty wack right here

Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
eh, not all that...couldve been better

ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
terrible closer

your lines were organized very poorly, but you did have some nice punches and personals in there. I think you were forcing too many punches to sound good and thats why they came out all un-organized and flowed off. a pretty nice verse, but i dont know bout it

ca$per verse:

Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….
hmm..first line sounded like it was guna be a dope bar. bad opener

U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
not lookin good for you right now..eh, not a good bar at all

3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....
heating up i see...nice personal/punch. nice bar

it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......
pretty descent. not tha best worded bar i seen, but not tha worse

this verse was ight. I was more interested in this one than tha other. I guess cause this one was comical. Nice punches and personals. Bad first half of verse, but then you picked it up. I think your verse was more structure and organized and I think it flowed better. I give you my vote.