Voted For: One M.B.

this was a close battle in my opinion.. but I think OMB took it... lemme break it down

anxiety- the story you were tellin was good and it was very simple/easy to read but also you had alot of emotion in it.. its very easy to see where you're coming from when i read it.. thats a few reasons why i liked your verse but i would have enjoyed more multis in there, i'll explain why in a moment...

OMB- The story you were tellin was different but i enjoyed it. yous was also easy to read but complex at the same time with the multis. Personally i think the emotion and story telling was on the same level but I feel OMB got this with his multis. And i know its not a battle but its harder to tell a story when you're ryhming more than one syllable. know what i mean?

don't hate on this vote.. im just sayin its harder to tell a story with multis and make it all flow together without forcing things and OMB did it pretty flawlessly...

RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showb...41&page=1&pp=15

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