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IP:
This Was A Pretty Decent Drop...
Felt That It Had Some Nice Punchlines , Hot Personals...
Structure Was Good, .... You Had Some Nice Wordplay.
You Can Elevate Alittle In Vocab , Maybe Use Stronger Words,
Had A Couple Fillers , But Overall It Was Good,
Keep It Up , And Dont Forget To Drop A Link Or Ill Close This 
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