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Word this was a dope peice i was really feeling it...
You had lots of emotions , and good feeling...
Nice Imagery , you really made the reader want to keep reading more
Nice usuage of wordplay , and vocab, Your structure..
Was good , sorta feel off after the first 4 lines ...
You changed up and made shorter lines ,
thought you could have matched
the bars, but it was still a very deep , and dope peice...
keep it up
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