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Old 04-23-05, 06:32 PM   #10
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Voted For: 9th Degree

9th...
I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
i guess i missed this one, wasnt feelin it for an opener...4/10

I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
this was funny but it was more like a statement than a diss...6/10

I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
good shit,nice observation...8/10

Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
(chuckle) das coo, man...7/10

Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
oooooo...dat hert, imactful delivery on that one...9/10

Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
awww, i thought u would have killed it till i read this...4/10

...38/60

pocketz...
This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
wording was off but good meta...6/10

1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
didnt really like da wordplay on this one...4/10
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
(chuckle)cool man, but set up wasnt all that...6.5/10

Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
alright but wording was a lttle bit of an obstacle here...5.5/10

Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
creative, good idea...6/5

u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
not that hot but hey...i liked it...6.5/10


..32.5/60

good battle, if it was closer 9th still wouldve took it for da better flow
i thought this was gonna be better tho

hit this up will ya
vs jimmy pocketz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187166
vs marvjay1009
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187048

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