when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn'
Hard opener. Nice personal, and a nice punch

u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space
think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT'
nice wordplay. This overall bar couldve been better, but still nice

yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
Dope ass line. Nice wordplay, and nice mettas in this one. Prolly ya best

ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl
2nd line was worded kind poor, but we got it

I liked this verse. It was comical and hard hitting with the punches and wordplay. Nothing I seen here that you really just need to work on, just a pure clean verse. 8/10

Skriptz verse:



Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?*
Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet
[b]A nice opener. Hard bar, nice personal

Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is
Kinda wack bar to me, and poorly structured

Looking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked
Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact
I think this wouldve been a nice personal if I wouldve clicked on tha link. Links are kinda a waist of time for voters, but you didnt lose points, because I understnad it, and it flowed and rhymed well

Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold
Kinda a wack closer. Structure fell off here too, and it didnt flow together well.

I felt like this verse was poorly organized and structured bad. I wasnt feeling this verse that much, and it seemed un-interesting. Some of the punches werent all that, but you made up for it wit tha personals. U started off too soft, then your verse kept goin up and down. No consistency in this one.

My vote goes to newkid. More consistency. I felt like he never fell off in this one. He came harder with the punches, and mettas and wordplay.

RTF on battle against Esco ya'll.....PLZ no hate...Just check my battle stats, if link aint in sig.