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you need to drop feedback links, just so you know......but i didn't mind this, had nice flow, maybe its cause im drinkin right now, or that im listenin to some rap, but its wasn't bad..........i suggest fixing your structure, just make it a paragraph, for flow/structure reasons, word, and some lines were stertched, keep up
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