element-your imagery was solid, but i wasnt feeling the way you protrayed this topic, it couldve been more indepth on a few key elements,example your descriptive-ness was on the weaker side, although this was an issue with your drop i still enjoyed the read.props, good job.

hells-i saw where you were going with this verse, to tell you the truth i wasnt feeling the simplicity of it, its just my opinion but it seemed very lil effort and thought went into this piece, i found you lacked in all catagories, sorry hells...try harder next tyme
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also, the amount of bs n freeposts in this thread is rather
discouraging, please if your in this league, read the rules and abide by them.
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my final vote.element.....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!