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Word this was a nice drop..
I was really feeling it...
You Had A nice concept, good Topic
You really grabbed the readers attention,
You had some nice wordplay , some nice imagery..
Your vocab was on point , you used some nice Emotions
And good feeling which really showed you took time out to do this drop
You had a nice rhyme scheme , good flow , and rhythem
overall keep it up, and i hope to see another drop from you soon
Ps:Thankz for dropping a link
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