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This was an iight peice..
I was feelin it at times..
the opener was nice , i was really feelin that ,
Sorta died after fates part
Then it started to get better again..
Your structure was okay , sorta feel off , becuase not everything was lined up
Fate and Hell Fire need to work on structure , Hell Fire elevate on wordplay, and vocab
Big City, Pretty decent job , some nice punchlines , alittle bit of fillers
good structure , overall this was a pretty cool drop..
Hope to see more from you
PS: Drop a link or this will be closed
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