This is an excellent poem, you just have such a nice writing style. The imagery and descriptions you used...whoa. I'm not joking over here, at first I thought oh no, again a mushy love poem but then you worded everything in such an excellent way. For instance the third part, with that hair like waterfalls. Vocab was on point, not too basic yet reader can understand everything. I absolutely love your ending as well, with the question "would you make that choice?". I really enjoyed reading this!

Solid piece!

DQ

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