because if its so true and pre-written then why do we fall victim
to what we know is not true . because the truth mutes our ears
to what we want to believe and acknowledge
^only some of the lines I was really feeling...

This was an excellent piece, long yes but so interesting and you managed to keep me focussed throughout the whole thing. Your choice of vocabulary was very good, found a suited balance between basic and complex. The emotion was very raw and pure, made me read it twice to really capture what you were trying to express here. Imagery was superb as well, I could picture the scene inside my mind due to the way you worded everything.

Props to you for this poem! Enjoyed reading it, nice job!

DQ

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