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Old 04-24-05, 12:12 PM   #40
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB took this battle imo
casper-your verse was too simple no complexity at all...and your rhymes was basic...your opener was kind of weak...didnt really rhyme...and to me your opener has to be atleast decent to catch the readers eye.......
OSB-you had a more complexity to your verse and ur punches were more creative and hit harder....the ghostbusters thing was kind of funny it would have been a lot better if you re-worded it....u had a couple personals...and the ski thing was creative also i wasnt even thinkin like dat when u said that.....so my vote goes to.....one step beyond
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