Voted For: Armada Da 187

Bro.........Breakdown 4 ya verse...........

aight drop..........first of all ya structure is wack, each line shud be separate not put a couple of ... and then text the next line otherwise it makes it harder to see the rhyme...other than that it was aight and ya flow was gud when i figured out where ya lines were....ya opener was pretty weak, the first line was pretty much filler and the 2nd line was aight....closer was weaker, it was short and filler with no real punch, the fan shit didn't work at all. in between u had punches but i gotta say that nuthin really stood out and made me laugh.....ya vocab was pretty much all basic and creativity wise was zero, i saw nuthin i aint seen before. need to throw in some mad metas and multies to make ya spit more enjoyable.........overall 5/10


Armada Da 187........Breakdown 4 ya verse............

aight a nice drop, another long ass one....when are you gonna jsut do a standard 12 line spit, they are far better.....ya structure was aight up until the end when you stretched shit which made ya flow a little choppy.....ya opener was weak like Bro, not really a punch just shit talkin mainly....the same in the next bar.........the closer wasn't all that good but at least you had a little multi in there......punches were ok, nuthin that really set it off and personal wise u need more improvement.....like Bro u need to get more creative and throw in more metas and multies and shit, beef up ya punches n personals to.....overall 6.5/10

V/ - Armada Da 187

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