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This was an average drop..
I Felt you could have used better wordplay , and vocab ..
Structure was okay but try to match up your bars if possible,
Complexity was blah , cus most of the words you rhymed w/ are
pretty simple, Punchlines were blah, because really nothing was hitten hard
for you , overall keep it up , and elevate on punchlines , and complexity,
PS: Drop a link or this will be closed
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