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Old 04-24-05, 02:46 PM   #19
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

votin for OneStepBeyond

One step got this due to a more creative series of punches

one-
Flow- nice flow i kept wit it easily
punches- creative i liked you opener alot
personals- descent personals come a lil harder neext time
strucutre nice
multies- didnt see any so elevate on those

i like this personal:
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed,
Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest
(creative n hard hittin

Limited i think you came to basic with your verse

punches- seemed a lil to basic not hard hitting
personasl- hard hitting n creavtive but the punches wernt
strucutre- nce n descent
flow was good i kept with you

if ya punches woulda been harder u woulda had him but they wernt

he had strong punches n a hard hittin personal
u had hard personal n punches

one gets my vote

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