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Old 04-24-05, 04:06 PM   #23
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Voted For: Mike Lowery

Mike Lowery

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
^hehe, played his location off real well

His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
^dope personal

This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
^funny shit

If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
^lmao, nice playing off his name

You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
^coo coo

This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
^good closer

Dope verse right here, had your vocab and flow on lock. Structure was good and your punches were creative. But best aspect of your battle were those dope personals, man...had me laughing with stuff, like the opener..was straight fire! Good going man


SoLo

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
^lmao, nice personal opener

As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
^aight aight

The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
^nice bar

^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
^haha, funny shit

Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
^last line is dope, first's bleh

Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
^okay closer, no punch though

Good verse here as well, was feeling your flow. Structure and vocab were on point. Had good original punches and some mad personals that hit quite hard but sometimes it lacked bit of consistency, well only in last part actually. But you had some dope ass lines in there for sure, played the whole Mike thing...

Damn, this is hard battle to vote on...because you both brought top A game...but in the end my vote goes to Mike Lowery for making me laugh a little bit more but this was so fucking close! No hate guys, was dope battle!
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