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Old 04-24-05, 04:35 PM   #41
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Voted For: Tstorm

Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
7...gud shit with the link to as proof!!
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
7...nice meta, gud shit!!!
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
8...LMAO!!! this was some funny shit!!
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
8...hot closer!! best example of self-glorifyin i ever seen!!

OVERALL: 30/40


Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
5...bleh!!! them lines are kinda gay!!
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
5...bleh again!! not feelin the 2nd line!!
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
6...better but still ya just puttin in filler!!
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
6...nice attempt at a punch but u didnt pull it off rite!!

OVERALL: 22/40


Tstorm gets this for consistency, harder hittin punches cuz evolution dropped them weak lines at the start and to finish he wasn't that gud either. need to elevate ya shit and stop with the filler lines evolution, tstorm work on makin ya punches a bit more hard hittin!!!

V/ - Tstorm

RTF!!! on one of my battles!! links in siggy!!!!
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