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Old 04-24-05, 04:56 PM   #14
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: PreZidict

BK Brawla-
your verse was missing rhyming words for the most part and that makes it seem like you just having a conversation with your competitor... but other than that, your punches were not hard hitting at all... the best line you had was about him having a film for the q... that was kinda funny..

PreZidict..
count bills? u illiterate, so u "stick 2 checks" like "elmer nikes"*
i seldom type, while BK "stroke pens" til da inks 2 "hard 2 write"
^^ROFL haaaaaa that's it! that shit was funny as hell..
i like the whole set up that punch alone was enuff..
Elmer's glue.. haaaa
i damage kids, u da opposite u hand em rings n ask 4 wack blows
nickname u "micheal jackson"..y? u "nuts" dats y we call u "jack-o"*
^^i liked the closer as well.. but michael jackson line's are getting played out..

this was pretty one-sided. PreZidict had the nice metaphors, but i like how Brawla attempted to get personal with his verse. But PreZidict took this by amile.. no hate, good luck to both, my vote = PreZidict.
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