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Old 04-24-05, 05:22 PM   #14
Freestyle-King
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This was feedback posted for lyrical clarity

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i melt down your shellz and turn you into a chain....
and since you from the state of mind i sedate your brain...
carry it wit me like lecter did, feed you to kids....
yeah you be spittin literally thats why you mic rest on your bib........
destruction of mass quantity to your imagery of flow....
johhny depps your favorite actor because you love to blow...
im established i skid through your verses intersection..
when you look in the mirror you see ru pauls reflection..
sadistic,twisted mind frame to alocate your soul....
put it back in your body so the bitch in u can unfold...
im seen like the twin towers, i have maximun power...
your switched like will smith they call your birthday a baby shower......
lock you in a elevator with a woman for 10 hours....
open the doors your toes are painted and n your hair is flower...
shellz i bet you never seen one,let alone pulled the triggah.....
herse 50 cent for trying to be a gorilla niggah,,,,,,,,


that was terribble vs..but he aint accept so it dont matter
THAT WAS NICE LYRICAL NICE FLOW AND STRUCTURE MAN KEEP IT UP
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