Voted For: J DOT

jdot

Esco kinda femine, changed cause his name said ‘LAYDE’(lady)
You’re a lame, just admit. Beating DOT’s not even a maybe

ok opener..coulda been worded better for stronger effect 6/10

You a female ass nigga, Watch how DOT turf cats
Ran up on you, robbed you, then gave you yo purse back

ehhh... already calmed him feminine in first bar... kinda filler...no real punch to it 4/10

Look kid, being tha best is way outta ya dreams
You a ‘femcee’, that’s why I kicked you outta Nok Out ‘Kingz’*

three times in a row with a reference to females... i'm seeing a pattern here... makes it seem like ya got nothing else on him... guess it's kinda personal... not very effective though
5/10

Lie all you want. Don’t matter… I know the truth
I hate niggas who bitch a lot cause they team getting boo’d*

now we getting to the meat of the beef...lol..pardon the pun... that's a good personal with some punch to it... just a lil punch but i'm sure this one will hit a nerve or two 7/10

And fuck tha team you with now, cause you da wackest nigga in
Say you not?...Look at yo record, I’m not convinced

ehhh..filler line..hated it 3/10

I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*

kinda bored me...good idea...bad way of expressing it... 5/10

Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’

garbage line.. don't ever use this again... plus somebody tried to use a cutting edge line in my current battle...he used it better than you did... 3/10

Got tazors to calm you down and give you a colgate smile
…Got lasers to box you in like a piece of tile

boooooooooo 2/10

[CLOSER]

We can be in tha same crew….LS, and I’d still hafto kill ya
Cause real recognize real and you don’t look ‘familiar’*

ok closer....7/10 (46.6%)


tephlon

How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved

ok opener...kinda personal..needed more punch though 6/10

Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!

lol...kinda funny...but stay on ya opponent...lil bit of a personal...ineffective punch 5/10

no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor

coulda been worded better...don't really feel the anger in ya verse 5/10

i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!

lol...best line so far...funny...7/10

u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!

booo..worst line so far.... 3/10

u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap

good personal...that's gotta strike a nerve...lol... 7/10

askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...

felt the idea but the wording was all wrong...5/10

god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!

ewwwwwww... that stunk.... 3/10

i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!

not a good closer...again..the idea was there but there was nothing behind it... 4/10 (44.4%)

battle was kinda boring... thought the personals on both sides shoulda been stronger... neither one of y'all sounded mad enough to gain an edge over the other... lots of good ideas throughout but the wording killed y'all...

jdot wins by a mere 2.2%...rtf in my sig...out