this was pretty tight....like one finger tight....nah, j/m, but i did enjoy reading it, because you used your vocab to your advantage, it wasn't too high of a level, but it was effective, reallly made your lines stand out....imagery was top notch, i had a good picture, and emotion......i liked the last two lines the most for emotion, just because they leave you with that final thought, like, a gaping hole in your heart, ya know? loved it DQ, keep up for sure

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