Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, i wasn't really feeling either verses, to tell you the truth, both came out dry, seriously, both have done waaay better, but this is a hella old battle....haha......im giving it to onestep, because i chuckled at a few more of his lines, i dunno buck, i think your verse was plagued by poor set up lines, and non-creative punches, no hate or nothing, just wasnt too interestin, i liked your intro, that was a good personal, but nothing was good after it, and i really hated your closer, no-show lines are stupid......so, onestep gets it for having a little more creativity, but kept it consistent......oh, critique onestep too.....meh, kinda basic, up vocab and wordplay, but you still edged this out

v/onestep

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