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Originally Posted by b-gurl

i really really thot this piece was amazing but i honestly didnt like the last line, it was like all the deepness n talk about 'daughters n sisters' n stuff didnt make sense anymore!

ur an amazing writer tho!!!:thumb:

Yo, its Analogy.. lemme brake it down..

"But you still didn't feel the same, I noticed your sister admired me
Your appearance was similar, I started to get into her
Plus you were so complicated, she was much simpler
Some people that didn't know, called her by the same name as you
Sometimes I got confused, but she didn't have the same mindframe as you"

Okay like, Lil John.. this fool is not hip hop. I am saying the sister is RAP.. now some real hip hop are the underground artist. It's more about money these days.. and that's bull shit.. "oh im ryding spinners" yeah it's catchy and not a bad song.. its just hip hop..
next..
Now the daughter.. I am saying I wanna step up my game.. Not that I wanna be a rapper but I wanna do slam pieces.. but I was writing this poem for hip hop heads.. I wanted more people to feel where I am coming from. I dont know.. at one time.. I did wanna be a rapper.. but its not my passion.
"And in a year or so I plan to make that love into our daughter"

(LoL) no disrespect.. but Im not sure how that confused you..
late..
Uppin!