wow, this was totally kickin' you sun of a beach...haha, vocab was intense, i really liked the idea you based it on, really, not even lying...if only you could see my face, and realize the truth behind the smile....haha, that was my thought, of everlasting arrogance depicted and coriographed within the standing time of this momentarily, speechless thread........word, i'll stop now, haha, but yeah, really good, i like the line about "he battle between the screen door and wind , its old foe" i thought that was a super line, haha, the relations is maddenin.....anyways, this was really good, vocab was perfect and very intriguing, cant wait to read the rest.......beach

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