Voted For: accomplish

EASY win. Accomplish - ya lines seemed kinda rushed, but there was some nice punches in there. Take ya time and type it so we can read it lol. Good punches, and this had a few multis in it and a nice rhyme scheme. Needs some work to develop though - some of this was basic.

Evil. MY GOD. Are you 5? I could have shit alpha bits and hads words fall together better. None of that flows... None of the punches are good. It's like you bit the worst 10 lines out of the 5 oldest wack raps you could find, and threw them together and prayed for the best. God rest your pen. 1

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