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Old 04-25-05, 10:55 AM   #15
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: OMEGA*

yo yo....omega all the way

had some nice stuff omega, some lines actually made me laugh, which was good, and you flat out came harder with disses, they were creative, had good flow....overall, just hit harder...although your closer was whack, because it didn't diss him at all....you can elevate your wordplay though, it was basic, but decent verse

GA...shit was too basic, and some bars you didn't even diss him, like the closer, and the 2nd bar, well, all i can say is, elevate your punches, get some personals in there too, because this wasn't really a diss, weak man.....but i think you just started, so, just work at it, keep up

v/omega
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