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leave you rest'n pz's
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This was feedback posted for Golden Dayz
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can't vote but pretty good drop by both,
lay-text, i didnt quite feel you stayed on topic
but it was still a koo read,...gd, your closer was mad ill
pulled your whole piece together....liked it, good stuff
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good luck to both
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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