Voted For: Big City

Big City

chea,...yo you just a manly bitch, this Dyke here wanna run
you like ya sig dog, cuz u LIGHT YEarS from a BUZZ
^hehe, nice opener

rappin aint for you, go ahead and switch jobs hoe
stay down, this lame clown, couldnt get PROPs at an improv show
^good bar, funny

heard that he dyin to pull chicks, im resupplyin the full clips
he like a rodeo clown, im amazed the way he ridin this BULL SHIT
^lmao @ second line

the attacks is vicious,... homie u lack prodigious
God couldnt save that flow, .....nigga its sacreligious
^okay okay

look jack, im pleadin.....this might b past ya reason
but u rappin, you got an Affinity for committing acts of treason........1.....
^good closer

Good battle right here, vocab was on point and I was definitely feeling your flow, some multis here and there which improved the flow. Punches were nice, creative and you had some dope personals in there as well. Structure was good to, nice verse man, enjoyed reading it!


Affinity

Ur grammar is weak no wonder ur shit at talkin English
If u got an issue then wait for god to deal with ur wish
^okay opener

ur girl called told me she aint even miss u, drop to ya knee
Bag, kiss my shoe, hit the floor, no need to force, u asked me
^no real punch

NOK=wack, feel my intensity as I Nok out the smallest Baron
I don’t bother to offer aid & attention, to anyone not Carin
^good bar

Call urself the biggest city, u aint massive, I aint foolin me
My punches “Knocked u out” leavin u at the hospital for surgery
^nice nice

The wrong decsion was NOK, you shoulda went vice versa
Go ahead think ur flawless as I order meat just as raw…
^decent closer

Overall okay verse but I felt you could've come a lot harder with the punches and personals if you worded them differently. Had your vocab on lock as well as your flow and structure. Just feel like you had nice creativity but nothing was really bold or hardhitting, no hate...

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