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Old 04-25-05, 12:00 PM   #21
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Voted For: iLL Cee

Opener…
Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow…
When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show….
6...aight personal but nuthin too hard hittin!!
U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action….
I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction…
5...this was a weak line, not really a punch!!
U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy….
And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly….
5...better shit, but in the 2nd line...where did he say you were friendly!! need sum proof to back that up!!
Closer…..
Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion….
Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz
6...decent closer, gud 2nd line!!

OVERALL: 22/40


Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose..
Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze..
4...BOOOO!! pre writ lines are gay!!
Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right..
Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife..
9...HAHA!! funny ass shit, 2 personals in 1 bar!!
How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin..
I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin..
7...another hot personal......gud shit!!
Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me..
You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See..
6...not bad, cud've been better!!

OVERALL: 26/40


gud battle, casper keeps comin with these mediocre punches that arent really affective, ya need to beef those up and get a bit more creative, ill cee, ya had a couple of dope personals in there but drop the pre writ lines cuz they are played and gay!!!

V/ - iLL Cee
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