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Old 04-25-05, 03:47 PM   #33
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Voted For: SoLo

one-sided victory here.... this was way too easy to judge...lol



I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"

ok...no real punch to it.....ahead of me lines are unoriginal

His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML

lol....funny... a lot of kats won't get the connection... good line

This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!

bahhhh....filler line

If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"

boooo....real mediocre-like

You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines

prolly the best line in ya verse.... play on his writing style has been done before though

This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L

didn't reallly like ya closer.... the whole forget about u... and the play on ya name has been done by everyone in RV.... bored with it.... verse wasn't too original... lotta played concepts and wild punches that never connected




Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…

ouch!!!! good opener and personal....didn't even have to look at the link

As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)

decent line here.. no real punch but looks like a pretty good set-up for what's to come

The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…

another personal.. and the hits keep coming

^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…

didn't like how it ended but the 5-0'ed line was hot

Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…

good play on crew name...lol....a lil stretched but a nice punch

Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…

ehhh... closer not too strong but decent... coulda been worded better for more effect
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