Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

lol @ the rules haa... k now the battle at hand,
Lyrical Clarity:
you had a lotta multis but your lines are VERY stretched, the majority of your lines are filler and you just kept rambling about nothing.

Ill Gramma:
i like the first bar very creative, with the "lower category" part lol @ the fact you used his initials throught the verse
your second bar was a stretched as well.. next bar is almost a filler (at the end).. LOL @ the "it took him day to drop"..

v/ Gramma for a least getting personal and not just random spittin..

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