yo this aight i've read better but u had some decent rhymes in ur rap nuthin that really touched me though..but keep it up and remain real i've noticed u werent frontin in this like some others in this site..just dont rap bout what u aint holmes and u'll do fine..add some more multis and make sure ta get a lil longer with ur open mics...i've noticed lots of you rappaz on this site is gettin a lil lazy when it comes to typin make sure ta perfect ur shit, make it interesting and add a hooks and 2 verses..but anywayz this shit was ok...6.5/10