ehhhhh...this shit was aight too....it flowed will and rhymed but the rhymin was too simple and basic and for how basic the words were it made the lines seem more stretched than they really are....yo i could tell u this was fire but im tellin u what i truly think and my 1st impression of the shit i read...u had it kinda too short but it was a keystyle so u could get away with that..u got a lil more complex with the last two lines of ur keystyle...which i liked but u gotta fit as much complex words in here that u can...the more complex the better...5.5/10 keep it up, you'll get better..trust me holmes