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Old 04-25-05, 05:42 PM   #5
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ahh, like shakes said the dopest part n most that
iu was feeling was your last couple bars, shit was solid...
the metas in the first half couldve been more complex but you overall
aspect of this joint was real solid, its not my cup a tea but it
is a good piece, a lil short(bout 45 55 seconds)
but i deff think its worthy of recognition,...need more
women to leave feed cuz im sure they'd dive right into this kinda stuff
good drop fam, keep it up............
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n remember the negative feed is constructive criticism from fam
that respects your drops.........nice read overall..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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