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Old 04-25-05, 06:43 PM   #10
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From: Barrie
This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz

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would be voting for konflikt if i had posts..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187821

Newkid - your bars were far too stretched and it through off your flow. you needed to toss in a few multis to pull off something like that. Your last bar was the only decent one..Mix it up with metas and sims. nice flow.

Kon- Your first bar was alright with the sim...nice flow, you have to be consistent with punches throughout ie. your first bar was about super glue...then it went to a mechanic wha?
overall though your punches were harder hitting and u had better wordplay.... rtf in the link plz
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