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Old 04-25-05, 07:01 PM   #35
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This was feedback posted for Mike Lowery

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I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
^^ Lol i figured this bar out, nice wordplay with a punch also a personal.


His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
^^Ha, dml posted fake pics, i get it now, nice punch


This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
^^ Good nice punch w/a personal


If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
^^ Meh ok punch.



You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L

^^ Aiight i liked the personal punch on the closer.



Overall=Good punches mike, your flow was off a little. The personals and the punches were connecting, and they're were hitting hard.


Decension-I liked this battle, both had good punches w/ personals, so i guess the punches and the personals is a tie for both heads. Wordplays from Solo were harder, mike your wordplays was good, but it wasn't harder than solo so although i can't vote, i'mma put down as a feedback.....G-luck in the polls solo.
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