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Voted For: lyricalflowz
v/ lyricalflowz
Adrenaline - ya flow wasnt all there.......u used good vocab at most parts.........structure needs a lil work.........da punches were decent nothin too serious........nothin really should out except this one line....
this kid aint a 'prodigy',he just a 'shook one' and his voice is gay
the only way he could grasp some 'skills' is by lookin at my 'resume'
lyricalflowz - ya flow was on point, nice usage of personals.........ya punches werent hittin hard enough.........its a good thing dat u used alotta personals or adrenaline woulda took it........ya punches were soft, kinda played........but overall u had da better opener, and closer
RTF......any post u see up wit me name on it.......TY
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