Hey man!
Dont overly post on your thread.. one.. you still need to drop a link..
Okay, this poem was a okay poem. Like, you need to work on your format/structure.
Also you need to calm the hell down man.. (LoL) I know how it is to not get any feed on something you worked hard on. I get it all the time.. and when someone does post its nothing bad. Always positive like whoa! this had great this and that and this and that.
Anyways nuff about that.. overall this was a good job. 6/10
Sweft

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