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Old 04-26-05, 11:23 AM   #9
~Lady Fiya~
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this was a deep piece i was feeling your emotion in every line, ya flow was nice and i really liked how you stuck to the topic..

Close my eyes because it’s too painful a sight to view
In the blink of an eye, it appears as if my whole life has gone askew
Nothing left to live for, life full emptiness, pain, sorrow, and misery
I’m living my life like it’s always a no luck guarantee
Loss of all personal positions, but more than that I no longer have any pride
Because my loneliness is a result of what happens when anger and drugs collide

^best part of it all...
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