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Old 04-26-05, 11:43 AM   #14
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Voted For: hotshh!

All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival
Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0
This was a good opener. Nice personal.

So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
Kinda played, but nicely worded. Good punch

Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say
Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy'
Nice play off his name. Nice punch, this bar made a lot of since

I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
Not that hard hitting, but it came at the right time. Nice punch

U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
LOL. Funny line. Good wordplay, and a good punch

So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
(silly internet geeks!!)
An ok closer, could’ve been better, but still nice

You came hard with punches and creativeness in this verse. I was feeling it. Kinda funnt in a lot of places, and hard hitting bars and wordplay. I think you structure and flow was on point here.



im 2 sick,and u bitch!..i just got a new 5th so fam a few clips.
a hit a head n leave u like da "yankee's when babe died","roof-less".*ruth*
Nice wordplay. Kinda stretched line here, but still hard hitting

type of guns i hold make kops-get-scared,chill! ya not-sick-quer.
he raps like "nelly" ppl came da see marv spit no1 cares if "HOT in here"*
U left a few words out in this one, lol, but I still understood it. Nice wordplay

no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket.
u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket".
Not that hard hitting. I think you tried too hard here

dis fagget lie's!...talkin bout in da bronx he shoot his gun & be stabin guy's.
put jay in ya PaRa-graph PaRa-medics gon tell ya moms her boy's PaRa-lized.
Syllables were stretched out here, making ur structure a lil off as well as your flow. Nice wordplay though

vets think ur still a noob who wants dis dick in a crew,he does alot of bickerin 2.
u spit with da flu?,no u "da medicine man" well i know "women sicker" than u.
I think this is you hardest bar so far. This was dope. I was feeling this one

couldn't "see marv" on his "bp page",im cool u dont wanna c-me-rage.
u'll neva get on da radio usin ya "demo as a frisby" a be da only time ya "Cd-plays"
Good closer, I was feeling this

Seen a lot of good wordplay in this one. Nice hard hitting punches. It’s just your structure was a lil stretched which took your gflow off. But all over this was a nice verse. I was feeling it.

I think I’ma give this one up to hot. No hat to marv, this was a dope battle, I was just feeling hot verse more. I think he came a lil harder with punches in this one, and creativeness, and his structure/flow was more on point. My vote goes to marv. RTF in bottom link of sig.


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