Voted For: hotshh!
MarvJay1009:
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 6/10
Wordplay: 8/10
Flow: 5/10
Structure: 5/10
Overall: 32/50=64%
Pretty good verse from you...not the best that I've seen from you but it was good. I felt your structure was kinda fucked because a couple lines were stretched which messed up the flow. Punches and wordplay were pretty hot, but could've hit a little harder by your standards...
Hotshhh:
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 7/10
Wordplay: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Structure: 9/10
Overall: 41/50=82%
This verse was pretty hot man...Feeling the punches, and I felt that they hit a little harder than his, plus you added more personals that hit, when most of his could've been directed towards anybody...Your structure was almost perfect, so your flow was too...Great closer as well...
No hate, just my honest opinion...RTF and hit up my battle vs Kesse in my sig...Thanx...1
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