Typing as I listen...beat is ah'ight not great...ya flow doesn't sound flow in beginning then it gets a lil better oh now its unsmoothe again....ya flow is choppy in spots....ya hook "jump up" that was not working man....u need to cut dat hook an write a much better one or double it an surround it wit addlibs to give it some life, some catchiness really cuz it has no appeal as is.....ya delivery was ok....u had some emotion going...jus ya flow an hook were lagging...ya lyrics was subpar but its a club type joint so it don't really matter how ill lyrically u spit but flow & hook is everything on a club track....I suggest u seriously work on this before u release it.

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