Typing as I listen....intro not bad....ecko u open too fast..opening line hard to decipher...did u jus mention spongebob?........u seem to be running out of breathe...u cutting ya words short at the end..u need to work on ya breathe control....the hook is ok if it was mixed better it would be ill.....ok decree.....yea son u got better fo sure....ya flow is cool but u got no emotion.....ya voice is real blan....u shoulda dubbed ya whole verse if u gon spit wit that kinda emotion maybe u coulda got away wit dat....but this was def. a good track...y'all both dropped good verse not spectular but listenable fo sure....hook was good but too dry....but overall not bad I give...6.5/10 good work...stay up.........1

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